Friday, July 17, 2009
Un poco sobre mi
Hola! Me llamo Anthony Steppe. He ido a SIUE por dos años. Me gusta a tomar clases en matemáticas, físicas, y español. Yo tengo dos hermanas que viven en Effingham, Sabrina y Bridget. Bridget se casa y tiene dos hijos, Dean y Clara. Clara tiene 11 años y Dean tiene 6 años. Me encanta musica mucho, me gusta a tomar y ecuchar a musica. Me gusta a ver videos también, mis favoritos son comedios. Soy en un "fraternity" que se lamma Phi Kappa Psi. Me encanta todo el tiempo que pasa con mis hermanos.
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2 comments:
1. You should greet people so it makes you seem friendly. Start with "Hola!"
2. "Anos" needs an "n" with the little squiggly line over it.
3. "Espanol" needs an "n" with the little squiggly line over it.
4. "Musica" needs an accent over the "u."
5. "Matematicas" needs an accent somewhere.
6. "Fisicas" needs an accent over the first "i."
7. "Hermana" should be pluralized.
8. Move "Sabrina y Bridget," set off by commas, after "hermanas" to clarify who you are referencing.
9. "Eschuchar" is spelled incorrectly.
10. "Ver" should be "mirar" to say that you like to watch videos rather than to see videos. Also, "videos" should probably be "peliculas."
1. Separate Effingham and Sabrina and Bridget..maybe say "Effingham, se llaman Sabrina y Bridget." If there is no separation it tends to get confusing.
2. put the word "años" behind the 6 in the "Dean tiene 6" sentence.
3. Lots of missing accents...look over carefully.
4. In the last sentence did you mean se llama Phi Kappa Psi and not se lamma Phi Kappa Psi?
5. Spanish word for fraternity is fraternidad according to my dictionary!
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