Friday, July 17, 2009
Los animales de los andes
Cuando yo era joven, me encataba animales y me encanta hoy. Dos de mis animales favoritos son la alpaca y el puma. Las alpacas son animales interesantes. Se usa por su lana. Pero ellos pueden escupir muy lejos. Los pumas son buenos porque son animales fuertes y rapidos. Me gusta gatos grandes más como gatos regulares. Ya un más animale que vive en los andes es el cóndor, pero son estraños y me gustan.
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2 comments:
In one of your first sentences you need "las" after son and before animales.
I think you need to revise for accents like for puma and condor.
I think you need to say "me gustan los gatos grandes" because gatos are plural but you only said "me gusta"
You wrote el condor using singular and then used a plural form of the verb. Maybe you should just check you subject/verb agreement.
It was a good blog but I think you should add a little more to make it longer.
-Molly
Hi!
1)Looks like you don't have any accent marks...
2)It seems a little short to me... maybe add a few line?
3)Why don't you add a picture or two of the animals you are talking about?
4)...grandes mas como gatos... I'm not sure if that's the right phrase for the comparison.
5)The last line confused me... lol maybe rephrase it?
Hope I was able to help you some...
Charissa
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